Comments on: Help to improve a writing sample for an English learner? http://www.createspersonalgrowth.com/132/help-to-improve-a-writing-sample-for-an-english-learner/ Law of Attraction - The Secret - Motivational - Personal Growth - Self Help - Self Improvement - Universal Laws Wed, 07 Jan 2009 00:51:21 +0000 hourly 1 By: Bookie http://www.createspersonalgrowth.com/132/help-to-improve-a-writing-sample-for-an-english-learner/comment-page-1/#comment-749 Bookie Mon, 01 Oct 2007 04:25:49 +0000 http://createspersonalgrowth.com/help-to-improve-a-writing-sample-for-an-english-learner/#comment-749 The words, self-improvement, and personal growth are quite common in our society today. I think the idea of self-improvement, relative products, and services are a sign that we are brave to understand our personalities. Also to admit our intrinsically deficiencies. The honest and realistic attitude could definitely help a person to improve in some aspects. Which could eventually help one conquer some of the deficiencies, and live a happier life. There were some run on sentences, and when you have three things, you should have example, example, and example. But overall it was very well done! The words, self-improvement, and personal growth are quite common in our society today. I think the idea of self-improvement, relative products, and services are a sign that we are brave to understand our personalities. Also to admit our intrinsically deficiencies. The honest and realistic attitude could definitely help a person to improve in some aspects. Which could eventually help one conquer some of the deficiencies, and live a happier life.

There were some run on sentences, and when you have three things, you should have example, example, and example. But overall it was very well done!

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